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hey there ! i liked this story ! it was yes, sad as you said it would. and i liked it ! the thing that was the problem was that ...

i wouldn't call it great but its ok. there were a few mistakes that the othes already pointed out, just mind those, edit it properly correcting the mistakes. also your ...

yes i agree with the others, somehow seems a little rushed to me even though you might have wanted to keep it short for the first part you posted. also ...

hey there, i really liked this. it was very well described and your choice of words were also good. i also liked the way you narrated the story and there ...

This was really nice.Just like one of the storybook type romances that i really love. i liked how everything worked out at the end. also the decriptions of both anna ...

this was a very nice story. i liked how you introduced the family members and it looked like they were all pretty close, espcially elena and her brother. i can ...

wow ! that part at the end was really unexpected. i never even guessed. thats what i all a perfect ending. don't really mind any mistakes that was in the ...

yeah it was really nice. and i just have to say this the man seemed vey sneaky!! but it was intresting, the plot. and also the title of the story ...

wow! this is really really great. i just loved the way you told it, there was no rush, everything just went on smoothly. you don't really find that in all ...

hey there, honestly really liked your story. But when reading the title i never guessed that there would be like a story like this inside. i was surprised. but its ...

hey good job on the story. it was kinda intresting really but as soon as i read this chapter i was reminded of harry potter. i don't know why but ...

hey there. sorry, im a kind of picky reviewer and usually if something doesnt seem good to me i say. sorry, please bear with it!! here's the review : first ...

hey ! so here's the review : - okay the first thing was that it was just too short and i felt really confused when i read through it. everything ...

preface : paradise gone wrong Here I sit the blade poised above my wrist. The chill of the water does not affect my already numb skin. All I can think ...

this is really really nice, leaving out the few confusing sentences. well the people above have already said everything that needs to be looked at. overall it was a really ...